Thank you SO MUCH, Jo.
This was exactly the kind of help I needed. I wasn't sure how to present the text without the illustration ideas. . . . Thank you, thank you,
thank you. . . Thanks for your encouraging words too.
Thank you so much for the invaluable critique. I find it helpful in so many ways. . . . I'm excited I have a clearer understanding of how to make the ms better and more fun for children to read. . . .
I really appreciate all the time and interest you took, Jo,
in reviewing my ms.
Thank you so much for your critique of my picture book manuscript. I am learning a lot from reviewing it over and over again. . . .
I appreciate your encouragement alongside your suggestions for improving the quality of the story. I will keep at it because
I have a hard time giving up.
The feedback that you have given me was invaluable.
Thank you so much!